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Sunday, 19 May 2013
Monday, 11 March 2013
ORIGIN© Invite to Book Reviewers
ORIGIN© is complete and I am seeking book reviewers to assess the first three chapters.
Genre: Science Fiction, Fantasy, Horror Novel
If your are interested in reviewing this Science Fiction Fantasy horror novel that will lift the lid on the truth about Vampires then please do contact me below. Or use the Contact Author tab.
All reviews will be published, and links to the reviewers blogs will be put on this blog and my facebook and twitter accounts.
Thursday, 31 January 2013
Sample from chapter 12
He hit the floor hard, unable to brake his fall as Joanna held his arms in a vice grip. His breath ejected from his lungs as his ribs compressed, she released one hand and placed it firmly on his jugular. She leaned forward, her mouth a few millimetres from his own. “concede?" She demanded. His eyes looked into hers, he was lost again. “concede” she demanded again. He just gazed into her eyes. She looked deeply into his; her lips drawn to his as his eyes penetrated her. Her eyes closed as their lips touched. She pushed down, hard, he pushed back, their mouths parted slightly, their tongues mingled and fought as their bodies had. She moved her hand from his jugular to his hair, grabbing him tightly
Monday, 24 September 2012
Chapter 3 - Release date
Chapter 3 - Joanna's Dawn will be released on this blog on the 15th February 2013.
Will Joanna find her former lover and rescue him, will she find out why after all the years he turned to her in his darkest hour.
Sunday, 19 August 2012
Chapter 1 'Joanna's Dawn'
http://joannasdawn.blogspot.com/p/chapter-one-joannas-dawn-knights-of.html
Please comment and give feedback
Please comment and give feedback
Readers Comments on Joanna's Dawn Science Fiction
A selection of feedback from readers:
Amazing Science fiction great opening chapter which makes you read more..... and I hate Sci fi books! Great story line with drama and suspence...... Its great to get into a story which grabs attention and interest..... Great imagination and detail some would say not necessary but really helps you relate to characters & reality.......
Story line is great to keep reader interested.... would buy despite not into sci fi storylines......
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Excellent pace, great hook on the first page. Great story, stands out from most books on thsi site as actually being a good story and not a piece of vanity writing.
Well done, I would buy
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All action, fast paced sci-fi thriller, moves like a bullet train along a trajectory or dead and mangled bodies, most of them caused by the heroine. This is clearly blockbuster stuff, Joanna Bond for the space age.
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Certainly the gore of the first chapter was enough to capture attention. There is a lot of good to be said about this writing and the author moves the plot along well.
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Dear Jonathan, I love Joanna & her diligence, as you portrayed her in your pitch & all the action she is to face, sounds totally exciting. :) You put me right there with you as I read all of the way through chapter 10, to feel what you were feeling & to be in the action like, "water crashed through the darkness" :) - great word usage. :) "so don't show the shining knight with me, sister" :) - I love it. :) "whispering into his collar" :) - all I can say it "what a great write!!" :) I'll write in my mind that Joanna will find her true love & live happily ever after :) - I really love her attitude & I love happy endings. :)
Amazing Science fiction great opening chapter which makes you read more..... and I hate Sci fi books! Great story line with drama and suspence...... Its great to get into a story which grabs attention and interest..... Great imagination and detail some would say not necessary but really helps you relate to characters & reality.......
Story line is great to keep reader interested.... would buy despite not into sci fi storylines......
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Excellent pace, great hook on the first page. Great story, stands out from most books on thsi site as actually being a good story and not a piece of vanity writing.
Well done, I would buy
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All action, fast paced sci-fi thriller, moves like a bullet train along a trajectory or dead and mangled bodies, most of them caused by the heroine. This is clearly blockbuster stuff, Joanna Bond for the space age.
.....................................
Certainly the gore of the first chapter was enough to capture attention. There is a lot of good to be said about this writing and the author moves the plot along well.
....................................
Dear Jonathan, I love Joanna & her diligence, as you portrayed her in your pitch & all the action she is to face, sounds totally exciting. :) You put me right there with you as I read all of the way through chapter 10, to feel what you were feeling & to be in the action like, "water crashed through the darkness" :) - great word usage. :) "so don't show the shining knight with me, sister" :) - I love it. :) "whispering into his collar" :) - all I can say it "what a great write!!" :) I'll write in my mind that Joanna will find her true love & live happily ever after :) - I really love her attitude & I love happy endings. :)
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